Tag & sig made should i sell recolours?

Im not sure or would someone like to collab and make a better wagon? Its a tag and sig set horse refs are credited on all images. its not as good as I thought it would be as this laptops no good for drawing.
any tips on the bg too?

together:

sig:

tag:


Im not sure what you do may just use all three horses under the saddle. What do you think?

Last edited on 2016-04-02 at 10:24:26 by Wish Upon A Dream

I would I love the design and I could possibly help with that wagon if ya want :) I love the background tho

I will buyyyyyyyyyy give meh! ♥

Honestly I love it! I wouldn't change it at all :)

adorable. i ♥ it. i think a lot of people would buy it

Oh me! I'd love to buy this it's so unique and western!!! ♥

I'd definately buy, but that rock formation right behind the horses pulling the wagon just seems a bit off. Maybe not make the lighter portion of it so tall. Other than that it looks perfect.

A new WIP shot, the pair is greyscaled but I may play with that. The ridden horse isn't greyscaled yet but the rider is. Just coloured both quickly to show you it all nearly coloured

It looks fantastic. o3o

AHHH! This looks super cool! What a unique and different concept. I LOVE the tack on the horses. And those grey rocks and the cactai are really sharp! an I mean that in a good way xD

For tips on improving the background, your rock formations are really neat, but I think adding some more vertical shadows in would really add to the straight up feeling on them. And the tops are kind of messy against the skyline, cleaning those up and making them more sharp clear cut would lend to their jagged nature.

For your hoof prints, first of all YAY for hoof prints in sand! But they're all paired too close together and not in a more natural walking pattern for a horse. Usually it's more of a left/right/left/right pattern unless they're stomping around in one place.

Lastly I think something to lend more realism to your backgrounds would be to pick a definite light source and then shadow things accordingly. You've got pretty general noontime shadows under your horses which is GREAT. but other background items, like the rocks and cacti and even the grass should also have the same general shadows, though a lot smaller. The contours in your land can also carry a bit of shadow in the lower parts, obviously less in noontime and more in evenings and early mornings.
You're doing a really good job though and I really like this set!

As to the Wagon, I'm not sure I can "help" in the form of collabs, but for the wagon, I can suggest some things based on general design. First, making the bottom of the wood portion higher than the center of the wheels. The Axles(which come out of the middle of the wheel) would generally be underneath the wagon base itself, and the shaft attached to the horses comes off the axle instead of the wagon base so that the wagon can turn with the animals. In general it looks like axle height is generally at a horse's hock height, which if your wagon base is moved up it will just about be!
Secondly making the wagon more square! straight edges are more common than rounded because they're easier to fit together. Making your wooden corners square would lend that extra bit to the realism.

Overall though, I really like this concept and you're doing a great job with it! Love to see it when it's completely finished.

Er hope you don't mind the word wall :/ I think I got a little too into it.

Last edited on 2016-03-26 at 12:03:47 by Sabriel

Haha its fine I have tried drawing another up but it didn't work sadly, and I tried to look on da. If someone can draw and colour one for me that would be perfect as I don't have an easy way of lines and colouring it. But I'm gonna try drawing one on paper and lining it etc. As I don't like the current wagon so much.

I have drawn shadows under things and I pretty much have the finished thing as my tag and sig, If I was to sell how much for and should I do flat sales or an auction?

Super cute wishy...you did an awesome job!!! I would deff buy 1 or more....ur doing awesome work

Thanks and long time no see mgarabs :D how are you?

Awwwwww givmeh! So pretty!