Username:
Password:
Stay logged in

[Follow] My First Manip ![FINISH!]

ForumsArt Gallery and Critique → [Follow] My First Manip ![FINISH!]

[Follow] My First Manip ![FINISH!]

#69206 Posted on 2016-09-23 18:14:48

Hello Guys,

As you know i make to much art day after day.
Since i can blend and color a little i decided it was time to do something i have never done: Making a Manip !

I have never done this so please be nice and respectfull !
I use Stock Images from DA and will credit the Picture owners ofcourse, no worrys !

Have fun ! ♥ ( Im so afraid to do this haha xD )

WIP 1: Found a Background and a Horse.
This is how they are without doing anything yet !


WIP 2: This is hard :P
I decided to start with the hair, so Mane and Tail.
Im now working on the Mane becouse i want them to be big !


WIP 3.

I have done some tail and Mane work and then decided to draw a gemstone necklace.
I have never, ever draw one but i think its pretty nice O.o
Now working on the hair again, but i wanted to show you the "Gemstome Necklace" :D



MY PHOTOSHOP WAS NOT THAT NICE DO SHE DELETED THE MANIP IS WAS WORKING ON >> I'M NOT GIVIG UP SO A NEW MANIP NOW

WIP.4

Oke, a New background and a other side of the horse ^^
I did the hooves into the clouds, man...what a work XD
I did the manes but im not shure about them that much :3
After that i made another gamestone on the neck, thinking about adding more !


WIP 5.

Another Gemstone has been born ! This time on the head !
I love making gems, they are so sparkly :3


This is a zoom-in on the Gemstones !


WIP 6.
Currently working on the tail...Im not so shure if i like it :P


WIP 7.

I made here tail look better and she is carying a Gemstone Hart now.
What do you think ? :D



END! I think this is the best i can do for now !
I have to learn a lot but i like the Manip how he is now.
Do you think i could sell these?


Last edited on 2016-09-23 at 22:52:04 by Maan


0 members like this post.

Posted By

Maan
#62490


Member is Offline
882 forum posts
Send A Message

#69207 Posted on 2016-09-23 18:20:21

Looks awesome good job XD


0 members like this post.

Posted By

Ꮑote_Ꮥkeet_Ꮑ_Ꮥtar
#99816


Member is Offline
516 forum posts
Send A Message

#69208 Posted on 2016-09-23 18:21:53

Thanks ^^
It's so hard to make good hair but i'm doing my best ! ^^


0 members like this post.

Posted By

Maan
#62490


Member is Offline
882 forum posts
Send A Message

#69225 Posted on 2016-09-23 20:21:24

The horse is looking pretty good, but I'd recommending making it quite a bit smaller. It looks rather too large for the background, like it is a gigantic horse rather than a normal size one. I'd say at least half its size would help. Try to think of the horse in the context of its surroundings, and imagine how large it would realistically be next to those hills. It's easiest to get a sense of that sizing when zoomed out, like in your first screenshot.


0 members like this post.

member signature

Posted By

River
#51565


Member is Offline
2607 forum posts
Send A Message

#69227 Posted on 2016-09-23 20:32:10

Thanks River ! The second& 2nd are zoomed in to show some more details !
And my PS was bugging so i lost all the work i did, pretty sad now !
But i started again... So more WIPS will come soon ♥


0 members like this post.

Posted By

Maan
#62490


Member is Offline
882 forum posts
Send A Message

#69231 Posted on 2016-09-23 20:57:54

The mane/tail is really good considering you basically redid all of it. The only thing I would say is that the hairs look really stiff/kinda pokey at the end. Maybe try blending the ends out so that they look kinda flowey?

If the necklace is completely hand drawn, it is REALLY good. Could never make that myself lol. Don't know how far in you are with it, but I would maybe adjust the chain on the left side and make it bend with the position of whichever body part it's on top of (that was so grammatically incorrect, sorry)


0 members like this post.

member signature

Posted By
wey
#94343


Member is Offline
3504 forum posts
Send A Message

#69232 Posted on 2016-09-23 21:04:24

YES ITS ALL MINE...SO WEIRD UHU !.....
Sorry ! I just can't believe a artist like you says my first ever necklace is good :O :O
That meens so much to me ♥ Thanks Wey ♥

This one is gone, but im workin on another one ! :D
My PS was going down while drawing so i lost the complete Manip !

Thanks for the tips Wey ! Can use them very good !!


0 members like this post.

Posted By

Maan
#62490


Member is Offline
882 forum posts
Send A Message

#69235 Posted on 2016-09-23 21:41:15

oh man, i would be so angry if my program crashed and i had to start over, lol. lucky for me thats never happened.

anywho, you're so welcome for the tips! i myself am still learning, so i'd be happy to share anything new i learn with you :)


0 members like this post.

member signature

Posted By
wey
#94343


Member is Offline
3504 forum posts
Send A Message

#69237 Posted on 2016-09-23 21:51:52

I was haha. But i want to finish something so i can look back what i did years ago haha :P

I love making Gemstones now, already made 2 on the new wips * look above :P * and i want to make more !
They are not that easy to make, i can do a Tutorial if you like =D


0 members like this post.

Posted By

Maan
#62490


Member is Offline
882 forum posts
Send A Message

#69240 Posted on 2016-09-23 23:04:02

It's very good for your first, I mean, very good. I think you could work on making the edges of the horse less sharp, and the lighting. The background almost has an orange/blue overlay about it, while the horse doesn't, so it doesn't match, neither do the shadows on the horse, but that's an easy fix. Otherwise, I think everything else is very well done, and with practice, yes, I think you could sell these.


0 members like this post.

member signature

Posted By
wey
#94343


Member is Offline
3504 forum posts
Send A Message

#69246 Posted on 2016-09-23 23:17:35

Yes im still working on Shadows / Matching etc ^^
Thanks Wey ! I will make a Selling Topic ♥


0 members like this post.

Posted By

Maan
#62490


Member is Offline
882 forum posts
Send A Message