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Space Horse Manip Auc. [AB Lowered]

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Space Horse Manip Auc. [AB Lowered]

#30570 Posted on 2016-04-13 22:31:45

(couldn't think of a name)

Hmmm,
Remember when I was working on my manip skills?
Well, here's an old one that's sitting and collecting dust...
Aaand, I've got no use for it really.



SB: 100k
MI: 10k
AB: 200k

I would like feedback on it as well. Tell me what you like/don't like about it.
I will most likely be editing the credits to make them more visible/bigger btw.

No rules really besides the obvious 'keep credits on', but ask me if you have questions!


Thank y'all!
Enjoy :3

Last edited on 2016-04-16 at 05:38:50 by snoglobe


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#31347 Posted on 2016-04-16 06:11:04

From your OP:
I would like feedback on it as well. Tell me what you like/don't like about it.

1. The horse just looks pasted in place :/ I think a different background and actual blending would've been a better choice, editing the brightness/contrast of both background and horse would help to some degree as will editing the horses color to match the background.

2. the "star trail" is the focal point, not the horse unfortunately, due to its brightness, I would personally do away with it and use a neutral color and make more of a "cloudy" trail using brushes and the blur filters.

3. The credits could use work - probably making them white/really light purple would make the difference in readability or not.

4. the mane and tail could use either smudging out (can be done to look painted without a tablet) OR can be painted using a mouse/touchpad/trackpad/tablet - I can provide tutorials, or help with most of either choice, in most program platforms just ask :) I have experience both smudging out hair to look painted, and painting with a mouse/touchpad or tablet,

I can and will provide any tutorials OR help if you ask me (just send a pm, I will respond as soon as I can). I am offering help :), I think for a starting artist you overall do have a good start to go in the right direction.


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