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#28775 Posted on 2016-04-09 12:35:50

I just finished this stallion. I think I have greatly improved with this one. Any way, how much do you think this would sell for? And what do you think I can improve on?



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http://orig13.deviantart.net/b0b6/f/2016/100/4/b/untitled_drawing_by_carley7104-d9yf9mt.png

(Yes I know the legs are a little shaky, so please no bad comment on the legs)


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#28777 Posted on 2016-04-09 12:51:22

try not to smear the tail, It downgrades the quality


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#28780 Posted on 2016-04-09 12:53:34

I didn't ;)

Last edited on 2016-04-09 at 12:58:18 by CarCar


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#28792 Posted on 2016-04-09 13:21:52

I think if you made his design a bit more individual, he might sell for more. He's pretty plain right now - most greys aren't just a flat colour :) Try adding fleabitten markings or dapples, perhaps different shades of grey! Look at photos of greys to help c:


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#28795 Posted on 2016-04-09 13:29:21

Just try to color in the lines, as the darker gray on his muzzle is covering the bit. Also, the same is happening with his mane; the color gets outside of the lines. And a few other places.
And, like Hoofie said, adding pizzazz helps interest buyers :)


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#28796 Posted on 2016-04-09 13:31:15



What about this...

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#28797 Posted on 2016-04-09 13:33:44

I like what you did with the tail! Some dirt stays...
Yeah, the dapples/dots look nicer :)


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#28800 Posted on 2016-04-09 13:39:30

Just fixed the braids!


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#29224 Posted on 2016-04-10 12:27:55

I would say fade the darker bits in a bit more?
Although I like the fact the colour is darker around the eye :)

Last edited on 2016-04-10 at 12:28:38 by ★ Travelling Star Farm


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