what's it missing?

Exactly what the title says. I'm pretty proud of this, considering the large art version of it I had before was a wreck. Downsizing and redoing it made it much nicer.

(also yes i know the hooves are a wreck. i'm gonna just let them pass because i spent entirely too long on them and nothinggg looked right)

This is lovely! Maybe, (Probably just me) You could shorten the legs? :) But they are fine ;) Maybe in the background a barn? :)

Im pretty terrible at backgrounds (why it's so simple and empty) but I could try that.

And the angle is odd. The horse is turning so the body looks smaller than it is. Should I change it?

Cool! If you like, I can draw some guidelines for it ;)

Maybe shading in the flank area would help?

I'd say incorporate the legs into the grass a bit more. If it were running through grass, you would be able to see some blades covering the hooves (like I see you've done in your current tag!) And maybe add a bit of a shadow on the grass, underneath the horse.
I really love the lines though!

Thanks Siren. I'm trying to grt the hang of it all still but I'm pretty happy with this considering how little practice I have. I think for this particular tag I might fiddle a little but I'm happy with it. It's not a masterpiece but I'm happy all the same :D

And you definitely should be! Its super awesome nonetheless :D

Hmm I feel like the back I'd a little bit strait maybe if you made it a bit more curved unward? That's just my opinion though?

my attempt at shading. whatcha think?

Edit: if you look at the one as my tag... I think it's about st a level to sell. Thoughts?

Last edited on 2016-03-02 at 10:45:32 by ₸ayzz

It looks great! I haven't seen what it looked like before, but I love it!

Although you could add some "gradient" (I don't know how to call it) to the sky. Like another colour to make it look more realistic :) But that's just my opinion haha!