*Flops*

I am horrible at actual sketches. This is going to be the death of me. the head feels so off somehow

Last edited on 2016-03-14 at 17:53:48 by Buck

The body looks pretty good. :) Your problem with the head is how it ties into the neck. It's set a little low on the neck. Also the eye is placed a little high.

Thanks, Sasan!

Edit: How's this?

Last edited on 2016-03-14 at 18:09:27 by Buck

I think the sketch is amazing! Though, in my oppinion, the neck is just slightly short. Again, only my opinion.

Last edited on 2016-03-14 at 18:11:53 by snoglobe

A lot of improvement!! :) snoglobe is right though if you lengthen the neck it will help even more.

After another look if you shorten the whither and flatten the croup slightly it will also improve. :)

Last edited on 2016-03-14 at 18:37:52 by Sasan

Sloppy edits are sloppy. That betterish?

Yes, yes! So amazing ♥
A lot of improvement, and not sloppy really compared to if I were to try doing the same thing ;) lol

I feel like the tail is set too high and stiff. a horse's tail flows with the back line, you know what I'm saying?
Also I think the front hooves look a little odd. maybe fix that also? everything else looks pretty good to me.

Oh I know the tail is off, I havnt gotten to fixing those or the hooves yet :3