Critique my pixel art
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#15931 Posted on 2016-03-06 13:51:25
I've just been playing around with making pixel backgrounds lately and I made this.. It seems like something is missing.. I'm not really sure. maybe it's the clouds? I dunno!
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#15934 Posted on 2016-03-06 14:02:39
I think it's mostly the waves. They seem too bright. It's what things might look like underwater and it seems slightly out of place.
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#15935 Posted on 2016-03-06 14:03:34
...this is SO weird, I was trying to make a beach pixel tag yesterday and I couldn't get it right either so I gave up pfft
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#15936 Posted on 2016-03-06 14:04:34
Maybe shadows from the clouds way out in the back? Really, I think it looks lovely the way it is, and a horse would break up all the sand so that's not an issue. It might be why you feel something is missing, just cause there's no subject in there. :)
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#15941 Posted on 2016-03-06 14:18:39
i agree with what everyone else said, also as water comes closer to the beach it thins out and becomes lighter so it's not bright blue all the way up. just like this and also you could make the sand a bit darker by the water to look like wet sand like this.
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#15964 Posted on 2016-03-06 14:44:09
Ahh I see what you guys mean! I'll have to have a go at the water again. Thanks for the help!
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#16062 Posted on 2016-03-06 20:32:00
Maybe darken the water a bit more, and blend it a bit more? I loves this! XD
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#16087 Posted on 2016-03-06 21:49:55
I definatley agree with the comments on the water. It seems to be at a weird angle. Other than that, it looks pretty incredible.
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#16164 Posted on 2016-03-06 23:17:58
This is amazing already !
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