When the Light Comes (Short Story)

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#222809 Posted on 2020-05-14 14:40:47 Hey guys! I've written a new short story (about 3000 words) and would love some critique to help me with the second draft. Warning that it ends up a little on the darker side (literally). You should be able to view it here. If you read it, feel free to tell me your thoughts, good or bad! And if you'd like me to critique something of yours in return, I'd be more than happy to. Thanks anyone who reads and thank you in advance for feedback! 1 members like this post.	Posted By Syrien 🐇 ☽ #86327 Member is Offline 1236 forum posts Send A Message
#223066 Posted on 2020-05-19 19:32:20 Not really into that kind of thing, but I can say it's very well-written. 0 members like this post.	Posted By Dragonfly #89253 Member is Offline 2233 forum posts Send A Message
#223135 Posted on 2020-05-20 18:27:23 Thank you, Dragonfly! I really appreciate it. ^^ May I ask what sort of thing you're usually more interested in than weird wolf stories? xD 0 members like this post.	Posted By Syrien 🐇 ☽ #86327 Member is Offline 1236 forum posts Send A Message
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